Animal Part 2

  • text is trapped
  • problem with abstraction
  • bird would look better in motion w/ tension
  • overall seems very static
  • too much texture in the water
  • white text on black background is difficult to read

Mar. 21

Body copy:

  • include details about habitat and why it’s endangered
  • 3–5 sentences
  • habitat loss (inundation of shallow feeding areas as a result of dams, for example), water pollution, and disturbance of nesting colonies
  • Arimo, Roboto, Work Sans, Crimson Text, Lora, PT Serif(pick 1–2 typefaces)
  • header, sub-header, and body

Mar. 22

Mar. 23–24



Get the Medium app

A button that says 'Download on the App Store', and if clicked it will lead you to the iOS App store
A button that says 'Get it on, Google Play', and if clicked it will lead you to the Google Play store